A friend Danielle

Any C&C welcome!

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why does she have face paint on?

She seems like an eccentric character, which makes for a great model. Though, most of these seem very soft to me, nothing really stands out as in-focus. Judging by the bokeh, were these all shot with the 50 1.8 at a relatively closed aperture like f8?

I think this series would look a lot better if shot wide open with maybe a bit of fill flash.

But on a more positive note, I love the model and I think the series works very well with the look of her. The naturesque hippie type shoot.

Same issues as the guy in the woods. Spotty light, slightly cold white balance, and they're a bit soft.

In this series, the face paint strikes me as "native" while smoking strikes me as "modern" so there's a big ... idk the word. Inconsistency, I guess.

Sryinex wrote in post #13217354
She seems like an eccentric character, which makes for a great model. Though, most of these seem very soft to me, nothing really stands out as in-focus. Judging by the bokeh, were these all shot with the 50 1.8 at a relatively closed aperture like f8?

I think this series would look a lot better if shot wide open with maybe a bit of fill flash.

But on a more positive note, I love the model and I think the series works very well with the look of her. The naturesque hippie type shoot.

85mm f/1.8 wide open. They're hosted on FB cause I'm over my limit on Flickr They're in focus, FB quality just sucks.

chris_arnet wrote in post #13217948
85mm f/1.8 wide open. They're hosted on FB cause I'm over my limit on Flickr They're in focus, FB quality just sucks.

#6 looks like the focus is more her chest / upper stomach area.

All of them look pretty soft, and there isn't much contrast with the background to make her sort of stand out of the background.

Nice looking model
It would look cool if you had the beast in the background.

They look very, very flat. Not doing anything for me.