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Location: Melbourne, AU
A lot of areas aren't working for me in this. Her hair is still dark, her face could use a touch more light, her right arm needs more light and you see several pretty harsh, conflicting shadows.
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Location: Essex, England
top left next to her hair the sky is blown out and is subsequently blowing a few locks of hair and the top part of the phone out which isnt good imo. i also dont like the right fore-arm being cut off though this might be personal taste and i agree with all of Mattantonino's critism aswell.
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Location: Buzzards Bay MA
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Location: Edmonton, Alberta
Joined May 2009
Location: Northern CA
Oct 08, 2011 00:39 as a reply to @ Nomofica's post |
It would have worked with the off camera flash as fill above the camera using a shoot through umbrella. Right now it's just lighting the side of her face and causing ugly shadows. Off camera flash doesn't have to be far from the camera to be effective but it does need some diffusion in this type of image.