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Oct 17, 2011 19:52 |  #1

All the shots were done using only one speedlite, please comment and critique. Thanks

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Oct 17, 2011 20:02 |  #2

Nice shots the only thing that stands out to me is in the first 2 shots what I am assuming is a reflector coming up from below seems a bit hot.


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Oct 17, 2011 20:56 as a reply to  @ Damian75's post |  #3

I like #2 the most though the light is coming from too low an angle and their faces are a bit hot. Her face in #1 is overexposed. and looks like the red channel is clipping. 3 & 4 look better exposure-wise.


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Oct 17, 2011 22:44 |  #4

bra straps in number one showing




  
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Oct 17, 2011 23:09 |  #5

What nationality are the traditional dress?


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Oct 18, 2011 01:44 |  #6

Damian75 wrote in post #13264096 (external link)
Nice shots the only thing that stands out to me is in the first 2 shots what I am assuming is a reflector coming up from below seems a bit hot.

Frugal wrote in post #13264340 (external link)
I like #2 the most though the light is coming from too low an angle and their faces are a bit hot. Her face in #1 is overexposed. and looks like the red channel is clipping. 3 & 4 look better exposure-wise.

Thanks, yes I was having a problem with that, the umbrella was pointing down a lot more than I expected, the light was bouncing off the white backdrop down by their feet. I did not realize the affects until you pointed it out.

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bra straps in number one showing

Yes, unfortunately I did not notice it until after the session was over.

kouman wrote in post #13265055 (external link)
What nationality are the traditional dress?

Kou, I think you have an idea but just unsure. Haha, they are Hmong clothes; simply redesigned.


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