Family Shoot this past weekend, C&C Welcome :)

Just finished up a family shoot I did this weekend.
Looking for some C&C. I'm not looking for someone to tell me why I suck, but to help me lol "Constructive" Criticism. lol

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These definitely do not suck. Your exposure is right on and the processing looks good. Only thing I can tell you is to work on your posing. On the first picture, the guy on the far right is out of focus. Perhaps if you shot it at F9 it might have been sharper.

Thanks. Sometimes you just get the arrogant people on here that just tear you apart haha Its happened before. I appreciate the comments though.
The guy on the far left is a little out of focus. I was shooting at 5.6 if i remember right. And that was about all I could do because it was so cloudy, we actually got rained out for the last half of the shoot. I am still learning (and aquiring equipment) any tips to help deal with a situation like that? Cause if I would've shot at 9 it all would've been blurry then. All I have for now is a 580 ex.
Any tips would be appreciated.

You should be able to bump the ISO on your 5d2 without having noise issues. Then your lens is IS as well, seems like you could have stopped it down a little more.

I think they are all good shots though. Well done!

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First shot is 70mm
f/5
1/125
ISO 400

You had a long way to go with that ISO and shutterspeed. You should be able to hand hold 1/80th. With IS, you should be able to go down to at least 1/30th.

Still, great shots!

These are pretty good. Nice exposure and processing. My main comment is that the light pole is a bit distracting. Composing to avoid it would have been best, but looks like it could easily be removed in 2 & 3.

I guess looking at the efix now, i could've went with a higher aperture. I will keep that in mind next time. Still learnin the ropes and everything appreciate the comments though. Thanks guys