My film shots on my AE-1 :)

These have no editing. Straight out the camera. Please CC

nada?

Well...ok...the first three are crooked...purposely crooked here and there is an OK gimmick, but you're making me dizzy. The second on is crooked in several dimensions which is really messing with me. Smaller DoF in the first one would allow you to appreciate the flag while distinguishing the subject better. As-is he is being cut in half in a bad way.

#3 is interesting but sorta "so what, seen that 1000 times."

#4 is off to a good start...but is it a pic of the building or the bridge? I wonder about what I'm supposed to be seeing.

On the up side, everything seems well exposed and in focus.

Thanks for the great CC. Appreciate it.

Like I said there is no editing at all.. not even crop.

#1- I wanted both subjects in focus, business man and the flag at the memorial site.

I agree with the above statements. #3 would be better if there were more people walking and interacting with the scene here. That last one would have been a cool bridge shot. Maybe next time get on the other side of that building on the left and get a shot of the bridge.

And yes, the exposure is great and the focus is spot on. Nothing wrong with the camera.

First fix your angles.
#1 - looks like everything is falling off the left side.
#2 - crop out the top left of this one but I really like it.
#3 - would've been better without the street sign in the shot. It gets in the way. again the buildings aren't verticle. fix the angle.
#4 I really like a lot of the aspects of this shot...I'd love to see this done in HDR to pull out the detail of the clouds and under the bridge. maybe try and darken the concrete on the bottom right since it's the brightest part of the image and my eye keeps getting drawn to it.

And I agree with the DOF comment about #1 - if you can still make out that is a flag in the background and put him in focus it would make the difference. As is I'm just thinking snapshot.

Thank you very much I agree on the angles. I am going to correct all of them in LR.

Thanks!

looks good, I need to get my roll of colo developed from my newly acquired AE-1

Love the third one, what film stock were you using?