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petriej
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Feb 04, 2012 17:28 |  #1

Please critique.

Canon T1i
Canon 580 EXII with softbox
Canon 50mm 1.4

My biggest regret is that I had the ISO jacked up to 3200. This was a total oversight and would like to go back for another session.


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Feb 04, 2012 23:00 |  #2

Not sure about others, but I am not seeing any pictures...


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Feb 05, 2012 08:25 |  #3

drvnbysound wrote in post #13827417 (external link)
Not sure about others, but I am not seeing any pictures...

you're not alone.


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Feb 05, 2012 08:28 |  #4

drvnbysound wrote in post #13827417 (external link)
Not sure about others, but I am not seeing any pictures...

Yes, but the numbers are in perfect order. The spacing seems spot on, and it appears that every words is spelled correctly.
Nice work.
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Feb 05, 2012 16:43 |  #5

Violator wrote in post #13828718 (external link)
Yes, but the numbers are in perfect order. The spacing seems spot on, and it appears that every words is spelled correctly.
Nice work.
:lol:

LOL :D


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Feb 05, 2012 18:20 |  #6

Finally some pictures!
Nicely composed shots; but I think you'd benefit from using a flash so you can use higher f-stops and get greater depth-of-field and sharper focus. Be sure to manually focus on the eye.


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Feb 06, 2012 08:14 as a reply to  @ Qbx's post |  #7

You shot these at 1/3200 second and ISO 3200 so there is quite a bit of noise. You need to lower your ISO to 100 and reduce the shutter speed. They all seem to be a tad bit underexposed as well. Make sure you expose to the right and check your histogram.


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Feb 06, 2012 10:04 |  #8

Violator wrote in post #13828718 (external link)
Yes, but the numbers are in perfect order. The spacing seems spot on, and it appears that every words is spelled correctly.
Nice work.
:lol:

bw!... nicely done :)


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