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Feb 21, 2012 12:44 |  #1

How did i do? What can i do better? What did i do wrong?

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Feb 21, 2012 13:12 |  #2

I am no expert! I like it and thibk it looks really good apart from the shadow / light under her nose, just looks a bit strange to me.


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Feb 21, 2012 13:18 |  #3

Thanks, it does look kinda strangeel now that i look under the nose.


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Feb 21, 2012 13:28 as a reply to  @ nest's post |  #4

I like it but her fingernail is poking into her face and her hair could be brushed in the back. I didn't notice her nose.




  
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Feb 21, 2012 13:42 as a reply to  @ pixelchix's post |  #5

Thanks pixel...


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Feb 21, 2012 14:50 as a reply to  @ nest's post |  #6

The light under her nose, finger poking into cheek and flying hair are all easily fixed in photoshop...


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Feb 21, 2012 14:53 |  #7

What lens did you use for the first shot? I'm thinking there is a little perspective distortion there.




  
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Feb 21, 2012 14:58 |  #8

Canon 24-70mm


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Feb 21, 2012 14:59 |  #9

nest wrote in post #13937865 (external link)
Canon 24-70mm

At what focal length? I cant read the exif on these.




  
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Feb 21, 2012 15:08 |  #10

43mm


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Feb 21, 2012 15:11 |  #11

Thanks frugal


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Feb 21, 2012 15:14 |  #12

I should have asked which body. For this type of shot you probably want to work with the longest focal length you can get in the space you have to work. It gives you a more pleasing perspective. With wider lenses things closer to the camera gets enhanced, in this case her nose. Note to the purists, perspective distortion is a result of distance to subject, not focal length. But the practical effect is that a longer lens causes you to stand farther away (given the same framing) and reduces the distortion.




  
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Feb 21, 2012 15:18 |  #13

You right. Yes i am in a tight space so i was trying to get the longest focal. And using crop(7d) sensor made it harder


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Feb 24, 2012 15:30 |  #14

I like the 2nd one best. She has some stray hairs (no biggie) but I dont think it would never fly in ad, and I think if the liquid was clear, like a vodka bottle with water in it..or vodka if your model wanted lol J/K.. the overall shot would look "Cleaner" if that makes sense. Otherwise I really like that one!


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Feb 25, 2012 00:19 |  #15

thanks ....lol vodka sounds good. yeah thats one of my favorites. but we only had beer at the moment.


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