Joined Feb 2012
You could crop some off the top, forget the vignette, brighten her eyes, post a bigger picture.
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ChristopherSteven bChristopher Steven b
Joined Dec 2008
Location: Ottawa, Canada
The vignette is probably the thing I dislike most about the shot. I definitely recommend playing around with vignettes and other processing, but try to think about the effect you are achieving by doing so. E.g. if you want a bright, happy photo, darkening from the outside via a vignette is usually not going to bring this out.
Mr. PMS Himself
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Joined Sep 2005
Location: The Tupperware capitol of eastern Oregon...Leicester, NC!
Lose the cheesy processing tricks, you've taken a happy, vibrant image and turned it funereal. A good crop would do more to help the shot than using a bunch of wild processing.
Joined May 2009
Location: Westchester, IL
Clean the kid beforehand would help you're picture.
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