My attempt, critiques certainly appreciated!

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SethDuBois Senior Member ![]() 718 posts Likes: 14 Joined Nov 2011 Location: Corvallis, OR More info | May 06, 2012 22:37 | #1 My attempt, critiques certainly appreciated! ![]() Amy ![]() ![]() Gear & Feedback|Flickr
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fxdb Member 102 posts Joined Nov 2009 Location: Idaho More info | May 06, 2012 22:51 | #2 Not high key, but a couple of things to think about. People in the background = distracting, Dirty feet (muddy) and dirty legs. Subject is backlit, but looks a little oof? 7d, 100-400L, 17-40L, 24-105L, 85 1.8, 50 1.4, 580exii, 430exii, AB 800, reflectors/lightstands/modifiers.
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May 06, 2012 22:55 | #3 i like the color (yellow shorts, yellowed grass) but the dirt and people are a big distraction
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SethDuBois THREAD STARTER Senior Member ![]() 718 posts Likes: 14 Joined Nov 2011 Location: Corvallis, OR More info | May 06, 2012 22:56 | #4 Haha yea I know it's certainly not perfect with those aspects. I'm not sure why subject seems OOF, it seemed fine when I was editing. So, what exactly makes high key? I just figured it was backlighting and lightened processing/ Gear & Feedback|Flickr
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May 07, 2012 04:28 | #5 Hi-key plus levitation - I love it! Don't ask about what makes hi-key or this thread will elongate to relativistic proportions. There's just no consensus. Basically if most of it is bright and there are no dark shadows it's hi-key to me. So I'd say get rid of the dark shadows by the strangers (and get rid of them too) and you've got hi=key. But it is not well executed. You need some fill flash to light your subject. -- Image Editing OK --
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iLvision Cream of the Crop ![]() 5,766 posts Joined Oct 2011 Location: Western pot hole city, Massachusetts More info | May 07, 2012 04:38 | #6 ![]() Ok shot but some people might think it’s overexposed. I usually shoot high key shots racked out wide open , and they’re usually headshots or up to the shoulder. Ilya | Gear |•• flickr
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