IMG_5317.jpg by gregchamblee, on Flickr
I don't think this one got rated, so here's an isolated rating (sorry if I'm screwing things up more):
7/10 I'm not big on military, so there may be some bias. Overall composition is good, angle is good for me. Exposure is good, but was probably a pain in the harsh lighting with dark uniforms. The focus appears to be on the casket, gradually going OOF as things move back in the pic. It looks like moving the focus back a little bit would have put more in focus, which helps with "story telling" photos . I would also crank the aperture up a bit more to F16-22 range probably. The sharpening on the "HONOR GUARD" patch seems a little too strong, it almost looks fake. It looks like a few eyes are closed or squinting, but the guy on the far right DEFINITELY has his eyes closed which is a minus.