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Jul 23, 2012 12:26 |  #1

Photo shoot for a local band's new t-shirts (though I did crop one for a head shot here). This was my first time using multiple strobes, a beauty dish and strip box. Feedback more than welcome!

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IMAGE: http://www.jrobertsnyderphotography.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/07/erica3.jpg

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IMAGE: http://www.jrobertsnyderphotography.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/07/erica2.jpg

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IMAGE: http://www.jrobertsnyderphotography.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/07/erica1.jpg

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Jul 23, 2012 12:35 |  #2

Attractive lady. My only suggestion is that I think the highlights on the left side of the model's head conflict with those on the right in #1 and #2. Just a thought


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Jul 23, 2012 12:35 |  #3

well done. I'm no professional, but the shine on her forehead caught my eyes. If you were able to get the skin to match the shoulders or right arm (in #1) I think it would go a long way.


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Jul 23, 2012 12:39 |  #4

Thanks Hugh & Jason. Having learned from this shoot (and learned a lot), I need to experiment a bit more with the placement of the beauty dish, possibly using the diffusion sock with it next time. She's not a professional model and had very shiny/oily skin, so when I shoot her again I'll be more sensitive those issues.


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