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MY FIRST WEDDING SHOOT

 
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Aug 02, 2012 11:27 |  #1

My first wedding shoot for my friend.

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Aug 02, 2012 11:37 |  #2

Are you open to critique ?



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Aug 02, 2012 12:27 |  #3

yes, i'm a beginner so please


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Aug 02, 2012 12:48 |  #4

I love #3. Im not a fan of the white vignette on the first one. Cool idea though




  
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Aug 02, 2012 13:28 |  #5

Great.
1-Funny idea. I think the shot would have worked better with more sky (to subtly put us in mind of flying, levitating); and I think the white vignette clashes, because normally I see the white vignette look applied to more formal, less comical images.
2-I usually consider it a kind of wedding sin to cut off the Bride's dress in this way. Aside from closer crops (waist up for example), I normally consider the dress an extension of her and try not to cut it off at least for posed shots (I often make the mistake though !). I like what you have done in framing her with the tree arching over her. The next time you shoot something like this, I'd recommend trying to expose as you have then add an off-cam flash to light her up. I wish she popped a little more in this image; this method would help achieve that.
3-Nice. I like this. Biggest thing holding it back in my mind is color balance. Hopefully you shot in RAW; I'd recommend making the image far more warm (so in the direction of yellow).



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Aug 02, 2012 16:30 |  #6

thank you for your critiques chris. i will keep those in mind for next time =)


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Aug 02, 2012 16:47 |  #7

I love #3 and here is a really quick edit i did let me know what you think

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Aug 02, 2012 18:11 |  #8

dang, i like this better =) awesome

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Aug 02, 2012 18:44 |  #9

Aaron, just a note that the user should have Image Editing OK before editing their photos. But great job on the edit.




  
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Aug 02, 2012 23:28 |  #10

frugivore wrote in post #14806530 (external link)
Aaron, just a note that the user should have Image Editing OK before editing their photos. But great job on the edit.

Fair call mate i hope they didnt mind was only trying to help out. I loved the shot but to me it needed a little something :)


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Aug 03, 2012 21:24 |  #11

np, i didn't mind anyways =)

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Fair call mate i hope they didnt mind was only trying to help out. I loved the shot but to me it needed a little something :)


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Aug 03, 2012 22:07 |  #12

frugivore wrote in post #14806530 (external link)
Aaron, just a note that the user should have Image Editing OK before editing their photos. But great job on the edit.

how will you know if the OP oks image editing?


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Aug 03, 2012 22:08 |  #13

Edit works nice ^^^ you live & learn, wake up to do another shoot


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Aug 03, 2012 22:26 |  #14

can i join the editing just to give you other idea?

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Aug 04, 2012 18:30 |  #15

vinmunoz wrote in post #14811852 (external link)
how will you know if the OP oks image editing?

In the User CP under 'edit Profile' the person can select to Ok image editing and it shows under their name on their post.


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