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Shots of my first time at portraits

 
jeders
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Sep 19, 2012 10:02 |  #1

Just did a shoot for a friend/old coworker and her husband. Its my first time doing this and I have to say I have learned a lot on this forum before doing the shoot :D

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Sep 19, 2012 10:06 |  #2

Color balance is a little bit off for my taste. Nice pictures though.


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Leica M3 :p

  
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Sep 19, 2012 13:53 |  #3

These are generally good. Here's some feedback:

1) Feels like it is cropped too much on the left side for my taste. I would have added just a little bit more room. I know you were going for 2/3rd rules here though. Otherwise I generally like it except that he is squinting a little.

2) Pose feels a little weird to me with him standing up so much higher than she is. He's also OOF.

3) Overall my favorite but personally I would increase the brightness/exposure on it just a little in PP. It feels a little dark, I think it is partly b/c of the vignette you added.


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Sep 19, 2012 16:23 as a reply to  @ SoCalTiger's post |  #4

Looked through your Flickr and the 4th one you have of this couple that you didn't post here is actually my favorite




  
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Sep 19, 2012 19:51 |  #5

The Dark Knight wrote in post #15015567 (external link)
Looked through your Flickr and the 4th one you have of this couple that you didn't post here is actually my favorite

thanks!

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here it is. her fist kind of punching him was intentional btw.

thanks for the feedback. the first one had cloud cover but i guess he really was squinting :o

here's one more

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i got to use my gold reflector here. i guess its noticeable if you're a photographer.

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