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My first photoshoot.

 
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Sep 26, 2012 09:31 |  #1

Hi everybody.

Im an amateur and this was my first "real" photoshoot. Just had one softbox and this model. I was shaking like a little boy beforere she turned up :) I learnt a lot from this, but let me know what you think.

Thank you very much.

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Sep 26, 2012 14:59 |  #2

I think they should be marked NSFW


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Sep 26, 2012 16:32 |  #3

Yeah... these are def NSFW.

I'd comment, but I can't really look at them being that I'm at work...


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Sep 26, 2012 21:20 |  #4

Model is not focused on you...detracts from the images. White balance is inconsistant between images. Heads cut off, I'd pull tighter on model. Looks UE in most images. JMHO.




  
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Sep 26, 2012 22:49 |  #5

I wish my first was like that.:)


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Sep 27, 2012 11:13 |  #6

Agree with previous comments. Underexposed, inconsistent white balance, lack of eye contact with camera, and the couple that are exposed OK are pretty noisy.

Beautiful model though.


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Sep 27, 2012 11:17 |  #7

Agree with the above comments ^^ A bit of tweaking of the WB [If possible] & the exposure & these would be much better :)

PS Boots don't go with the nice undies, she needs to be wearing HEELS :lol:


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Sep 27, 2012 11:21 |  #8

We have full nudity in the newspapers over here in Europe so this person likely didn't realize that underwear which covers the same areas as a bikini would be a problem :P

Anyways, thing that stuck out the most to me were the big white balance variations. Are you selecting white balance manually or do you have it set on a preset?


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Sep 27, 2012 12:51 |  #9

About the WB. I was messing with it. I'm more video guy than photographer and I love color grading videos. But as I can see it's not a good thing with photos or I just really suck at it :( I just wanted every picture look different because I was trying different things. More I look at them photos now, less I like them :( I messed up so many things. I was shooting a video as a main job but I really wanted to take some pictures as well. I tought I did well, but obviously I didnt :)

About the NSFW. I didnt know what it means up until now. Sometimes Im really glad I live in europe :)

Thanks everybody for your comments.




  
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Sep 28, 2012 02:21 |  #10

I'll say; You did an awesome job for first time. Don't knock yourself for being criticize. You is as tool and keep the critiques in-mind next time. Keep them coming...


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Sep 28, 2012 02:45 |  #11

Must get myself a soft box!


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