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Sep 27, 2012 16:12 |  #1

guys,
now i'm not so good with composition.
attending a photography workshop since last few days.
now on the main event, i must have to Print out one or two of my images to put in the display.
Had a trip of slum area n captured a few. please critique these photos. tellme what is the best one. Which one or two i should display. P.s what more i can do with them in post processing . (already have their Raw)

taken with 60D n 60mm 1.8

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Sep 27, 2012 16:12 |  #2

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Sep 27, 2012 19:39 |  #3

I really like #3


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Sep 27, 2012 19:59 |  #4

I like #8. has a very moving expression on his face.




  
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Sep 27, 2012 20:27 |  #5

#4 and 8 for me




  
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Sep 27, 2012 20:50 |  #6

#3 tells a great story for me


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Sep 27, 2012 20:56 |  #7

3, 5, and 8 are really strong images


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Sep 28, 2012 00:23 |  #8

Alright. so 3 and 8 for the most of the people
Now tellme another thing.
as i havnt done this thing before. Shall i add a copyright thing on my image?
As i am gonna print on some big sheet , frame it and display on exhibition.
Any experience?


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Sep 28, 2012 08:29 |  #9

I personally prefer 4 even though the top of her head is cut off, I also think some of these would be great converted into high contrast black and white images


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Sep 28, 2012 14:51 as a reply to  @ foxhound's post |  #10

Gonna be a wet blanket here...IMHO, your colors are messed up...generally an excess of PP.


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Sep 29, 2012 09:00 |  #11

I think the direct hard flash mounted close to camera messes up your indoor shots. If you had used a diffuser or bounced the light I think it would have worked better.


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Sep 29, 2012 17:43 |  #12

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I think the direct hard flash mounted close to camera messes up your indoor shots. If you had used a diffuser or bounced the light I think it would have worked better.

I agree, don't like the first 2 at all for this reason.

3 is really good though, and i like 6,7 and 8


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Oct 01, 2012 09:41 |  #13

the 4th, 5th and 8th are all really good. 5th if you want to show the fun and smiles even in the midst, and 8th if you don't IMO.


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Oct 01, 2012 19:18 |  #14

3 and 4. I think I would like 3 more with the hand was more in focus. I would like 4 more if the composition was more like 3, keeping the top of the head.


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Oct 02, 2012 01:49 |  #15

3, 6 and 8 are good. 6 could use a bit more saturation/warming though (color on 5 is better)

composition on the rest is not very interesting




  
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