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Oct 03, 2012 19:11 |  #1

this was a mini session at the new marlins ballpark. they love vintage inspired oldschool baseball and shoes. this was one of the shots i thought captured both their passions pretty well. please C&c :)


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Oct 03, 2012 21:24 |  #2

needs to be part of something else. position and interaction does not say "love" to me, says bored.


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Oct 04, 2012 00:22 |  #3

ChunkyDA wrote in post #15076982 (external link)
needs to be part of something else. position and interaction does not say "love" to me, says bored.

Well he did say they were at a Marlins game.....


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Oct 04, 2012 02:22 |  #4

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Oct 04, 2012 05:14 |  #5

I would love to see this in colour or straight out of camera! The shoes on the left seems overexposed! Also the editing doesn't suit this for me personally, but I actually like the pic, just not the editing!




  
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Oct 04, 2012 06:50 |  #6

When I first looked at the image I immediately thought I didn't like it. After a second look, I think Albertonman may be correct, the over-exposed shoes are kind of killing it. It's hard to make out any detail and make the connection of their shared love of old school shoes. Would like to see a color version too.


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Oct 04, 2012 09:11 |  #7

i didnt mean they like old school shoes, i meant they like old timey baseball and also they like shoes. The shoes are hot but the rest of the scene is so dark if i make more global changes i lose too much of everything else.

it is part of a much larger set, i guess its just not a good shot. thanks




  
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Oct 04, 2012 11:00 |  #8

The depth of field is so shallow, if you hadn't told me what the scene was, I'd have had a very difficult time figuring out that they were at a ball game....


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Oct 04, 2012 11:31 |  #9

Numenorean wrote in post #15077580 (external link)
Well he did say they were at a Marlins game.....

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Oct 04, 2012 12:57 |  #10

Shoes have no detail. Would like to see the original.


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Oct 04, 2012 16:27 |  #11

The back of the people are mostly noise, shoes are hot, picture looks underexposed, looks out of focus and I'm not a fan of the processing. Other than that I love the concept.




  
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Oct 04, 2012 19:02 |  #12

I agree with ChuckingFluff. The concept is terrific. I would love to see the OP take another go at it, it could be a great image.


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Oct 04, 2012 21:12 |  #13

There is no story in this photo. You can't tell that they are at a ball game, you can't tell that the subjects are a boy & girl and you can barely see that they are holding hands. -rick


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Oct 04, 2012 21:58 |  #14

Season's over now for the Marlins....If they really are into old school, maybe they should become Tigers fans.


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Oct 04, 2012 22:00 |  #15

alazgr8 wrote in post #15081322 (external link)
There is no story in this photo. You can't tell that they are at a ball game, you can't tell that the subjects are a boy & girl and you can barely see that they are holding hands. -rick

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