Some shots from an outing yesterday.
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Oct 21, 2012 18:44 | #1 Some shots from an outing yesterday. 2 3 4 5d mark ii, 5d gripped, 135L, 70-200 f4L, 35L, 50 f1.4, 85 f1.8, 430ex ii.
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KirkS518 Goldmember ![]() 3,983 posts Likes: 24 Joined Apr 2012 Location: Central Gulf Coast, Flori-duh More info | Oct 21, 2012 19:11 | #2 I'm ok with 3 & 4 (except for the dead leaf on his head in 3), but 1 & 2 aren't working for me. In 1, you've changed the subject from the boy to the stick/log, and that's not really attractive or anything someone wants to really look at. #2 has no subject, and the grey/white are on the middle left is distracting. Not sure what the goal was with #2. I think if it wasn't so cluttered, and there was something to look at in 2, you might have something, but as it sits, not a keeper to me. Just my 2 cents. If steroids are illegal for athletes, should PS be illegal for models?
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Daship Senior Member 765 posts Joined Dec 2010 More info | Oct 21, 2012 19:23 | #3 I like em.
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Oct 21, 2012 19:49 | #4 I like the idea in #1, I just think it needed a better foreground item. Maybe his cape? 5D III / Canon 50mm 1.4 / Canon 50mm 1.8 / 17-40L / 135L / 85L 1.2 II / 70-200L 2.8 IS
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alazgr8 Member ![]() 233 posts Joined Apr 2012 Location: Orange County, CA. More info | #1, I'd like to see what the boy is doing to the stick, looking at the end of the stick is an incomplete story. #2 doesn't do anything for me. #3. Nice. #4, My favorite. Handsome young boy. it's a complete story. Thanks for popsting. -rick Rick S.
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Oct 22, 2012 05:34 | #6 #1 - The cut end of a small old tree branch is not too interesting. -- Image Editing OK --
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petechewy Member ![]() 66 posts Likes: 3 Joined Mar 2009 Location: Christchurch More info | Oct 22, 2012 07:16 | #7 Funny enough I like #2 the most. I think it is important to see that as an art work rather than photography. Like others, I get lost in that image, but it is a good kind of lost. In saying that, a small bug, or leaf amongst the grass will instantly give the photo a subject and transform it into a wonderful photo. [SIZE=1][B]450D, 50D, Sig 10-20mm, ef18-55mm kit, ef50mm 1.4 USM, 430EX
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Oct 22, 2012 17:01 | #8 Like 3 and 4 but lose the leaf. 6D | 7D MkII | 16-35 f4L | 35 f1.2L II | 135 f2L | 180 f3.5L | 400 f5.6L
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