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Nov 07, 2012 15:03 |  #1

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Nov 07, 2012 15:05 |  #2

Sorry about this size guys


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Nov 07, 2012 15:23 |  #3

no problem on the size, this is much better than the links you posted in the other post.

like 1 and 2, especially 2.




  
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Nov 07, 2012 16:31 |  #4

My favorite is #2 :). The last one is funny :p. I feel like #1 lacks something.. I don't know if maybe your intention was to have the shadows like that on her face, but my personal preference would be to light it up a bit.



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Nov 08, 2012 08:53 |  #5

#3 is really cute! White Balance is off all the way around. Looks like a serious green/yellow tint going on.

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Nov 08, 2012 09:07 |  #6

1 & 3 are more underexposed and need more light. All three have vignetting going on and as mentioned the white balance is off. Wish you got a tad wider on #2 to avoid the edge so close to the mom's hair and the clipped foot. It could use a bit more light as well. But nice expressions and emotion in #2.


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