C&C please !
This was not a posed portrait, my "model" hates posing and I like natural expressions.
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Nov 10, 2012 12:27 | #1 C&C please ! HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size. Ex-Canon shooter. Now Sony Nex.
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alazgr8 Member  233 posts Joined Apr 2012 Location: Orange County, CA. More info | Nov 10, 2012 12:57 | #2 I like candid portrait shots as well, but this one is a miss. It's not your fault. It's a good picture, and your subject is a pretty lady, but she just didn't give you anything to work with. -rick Rick S.
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Nov 10, 2012 13:00 | #3 This would have been improved if you had not gotten the sky in the scene, since it's too bright and taking attention away from the subject. Also, the subject placed more to the right of the frame would work better because there would be more leading space and it would not seem so static of an image.
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Spike44 Goldmember 2,155 posts Likes: 3 Joined Dec 2007 More info | Nov 10, 2012 19:12 | #4 It looks like you captured her when she wasn't ready....this you may call natural but I wouldn't call it a good look (dare I say pose). Don't expect the model to tell you what to do or when to shoot.
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Numenorean Cream of the Crop 5,013 posts Likes: 28 Joined Feb 2011 More info | Nov 11, 2012 18:20 | #5 |
Titus213 Cream of the Crop  More info | Nov 12, 2012 01:44 | #6 I don't find it oof but it seems plain? I keep coming back to it and the more I look the more I like it. Simple, straight forward image, nothing fancy.  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size. Dave
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imjason Goldmember 1,667 posts Likes: 3 Joined Nov 2010 Location: Bay Area, CA More info | Nov 12, 2012 01:50 | #7 i wouldnt call it a portrait. its just a snap in my book. Canon gear: EOS M, Canonet QL17, SX230HS, S95, SD1200IS
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Nov 12, 2012 10:36 | #8 Titus: no, I appreciate your taking time to show suggested improvements. Ex-Canon shooter. Now Sony Nex.
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Titus213 Cream of the Crop More info | Nov 12, 2012 11:27 | #9 Amamba wrote in post #15236562  Titus: no, I appreciate your taking time to show suggested improvements. Looks like you fixed the highlights on the left side of her face ? I am on a tablet right now so the colors are somewhat hard to judge. Her skin needed some help and the highlights in the BG were reduced. Also warmed her up a bit, brightened her eyes, lot of little things. Dave
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johndoorley Senior Member 364 posts Likes: 3 Joined Jan 2011 More info | Nov 12, 2012 18:04 | #10 Nice touchup Dave!
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Titus213 Cream of the Crop More info | Nov 12, 2012 23:44 | #11 I would actually crop just the opposite so she is looking into the frame rather than out. Good idea though. Dave
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