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Nov 27, 2012 21:36 |  #1

worked with JoJo tonight, I thought this shot turned out well...

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Nov 27, 2012 22:42 |  #2

nice eyes, skin looks a little red, but i'm betting that's the color it was




  
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Nov 28, 2012 05:15 as a reply to  @ rick_reno's post |  #3

It does look a bit red....I might take the little blood shots from her eye too.


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Nov 28, 2012 06:29 |  #4

She looks like a nice looking girl but I don't think this photo flatters her as much as it could.

I'd guess it was taken with a fairly short focal length. Try shooting from further away with a longer focal length for a more flattering perspective. Also, although her skin isn't bad in the slightest, a close up like this shows every slight spot or blemish so try a little touch up or skin smoothing but not too much. It could also do with a slight boost to the exposure by about half a stop. Finally I'd say the eyes aren't quite right. With the large area of white from her left eye showing it draws too much attention. If you had her look slightly more to her right (camera left) or bring her nose more in line with the camera then you'd reduce the whites of the eye.

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Nov 28, 2012 10:49 |  #5

the wb looks off . red . try a b/w conv see how it looks .....this is a nice natural image


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Nov 29, 2012 07:52 |  #6

thanks for the input, working with people is still very new to me. The above photo doesnt seem to look as red on my monitor but on here it is very apparent, does this one look better?

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Nov 29, 2012 15:14 |  #7

yes looks a lot better than the first image skin tone is better on my monitor in this shot


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Nov 29, 2012 16:09 |  #8

Nice, pretty subject.


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Nov 29, 2012 18:23 |  #9

Yeah skin tone is much better on #2 and I like #2 in general more too. I like the comp and capture.

Eye whites are just over the line of being too processed IMO. I'd dial back the opacity on that just a tad and you should be good.


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Nov 29, 2012 20:04 |  #10

What bugs me about photo #2 is getting part of her arm on the right side that comes and goes. And having her up against that red thing doesn't help to have her separated from the background. A someone else mentioned it looks like this was taken with a short focal length which is why everything in in focus in these images when less DOF seems like it would benefi the look here.




  
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Nov 29, 2012 20:20 |  #11

yeah, working in very confined space on this shoot and shot this at 50mm I believe. Would rather have used a longer lens but I physically didnt have the space.


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