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Jan 01, 2013 13:06 |  #1

Elizabeth is an aspiring model from MM - A quick mini outdoor shoot with her.

Suggestions and Feedback is very welcome and appreciated.


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Jan 01, 2013 13:17 |  #2

I think you over cooked her face a tad in pp.




  
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Jan 01, 2013 14:04 |  #3

leeport wrote in post #15431357 (external link)
I think you over cooked her face a tad in pp.

Agreed, maybe just a tad, but otherwise these look great. Beautiful model with a good feel for things. I like the mood and settings also.


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Jan 01, 2013 14:33 |  #4

Thanks - I will rework on facial skin....




  
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Jan 02, 2013 08:43 |  #5

wow.. what a charmer!


The "eyes" have it !


  
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Jan 02, 2013 10:01 |  #6

You have some really really nice work on your website. Id do more of what you have on there and a lot less of what you have on these shots. They look like they were taken by different photographers! Granted, most of yuor site work is studio shots. These images look to have a lot more processing than your portfolio. Some of your wedding shots are stunning, both compositionally and technically. Are you trying new processing here?


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Jan 02, 2013 10:17 as a reply to  @ JakAHearts's post |  #7

She has a great look but in my opinion comes across as trying too hard. The expressions and body positions look kind of forced. For me, the second image is the most successful.


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Jan 02, 2013 12:56 |  #8

Great series, fantastic model. Interesting composition in all shots. I like most #2.




  
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Jan 03, 2013 08:54 |  #9

Beautiful shots


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Jan 03, 2013 20:48 |  #10

nice model


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Jan 04, 2013 09:21 |  #11

Sensational work - well done


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Jan 04, 2013 09:23 |  #12

really nice


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Jan 05, 2013 13:35 |  #13

Thank you everyone for your encouragement.

I agree that her skin does look a bit overcooked - she had a lot of acne / pimples and I tried to cover them to the best of my ability without overprocessing.... will try to work on these again.




  
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Jan 05, 2013 13:55 |  #14

Great shots


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Jan 06, 2013 08:14 |  #15

I like 1 and 5 best.. especially her expression and pose in 5

Nice work :)


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