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Apr 17, 2013 22:11 |  #1

Pls give some feedback for my photo.. Thank you.

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Apr 17, 2013 23:30 |  #2

Pretty, I usually like light flares. Does this one over power the girl and become the focal point?




  
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Apr 18, 2013 00:15 |  #3

very nice picture, I like your composition. Although in post-processing, you might have put too much clarify in the background, It detracts me from the model.




  
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Apr 18, 2013 00:39 |  #4

Its a good looking picture, however I find the background to be very distracting. My eyes are drawn to the trees, not the model.


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Apr 18, 2013 00:51 |  #5

A little over sharpened to me




  
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Apr 18, 2013 03:44 |  #6

Thank you all for comments.. will redo..




  
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Apr 20, 2013 10:01 |  #7

A good idea but needs more work. Your subject though is lost in background and this is never good.


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Apr 22, 2013 18:12 |  #8

yes, too over sharpened background and the overall image is kind of flat. id like a few more shadows that will make the girl pop out a bit more and it might be just me but that lantern by her feet does nothing for the shot..


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Apr 22, 2013 20:27 |  #9

Just my first reaction, but the girl seems to be too small relative to the whole scene, and she seems to "blend in" too much with the background (as stated previously).


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Apr 23, 2013 00:31 |  #10

Could use a tighter crop as well. Just to the right of the bench and just below the lantern.


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