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May 03, 2013 05:05 |  #1

Hi all, it's me again. C&C appreciated. Thank you.

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May 03, 2013 06:01 |  #2

THE SECOND SHOT FROM YOUR SET IS VERY GOOD......WELL SHOT the other two images are not very captivating to me .... compositionon the first and the crop on the last..(jmo)


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May 03, 2013 06:15 |  #3

Agree that the second shot is excellent.

The model is lost in the first shot....too much background and not enough model.
The processing looks overdone on the last one to me. Also, if you included her feet instead of cutting them off, the crop may have been better.

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May 03, 2013 06:58 |  #4

exif on the second shot shows 200mm f1.2. something weird going on there? second shot is the best for me. third shot looks way too saturated.


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May 03, 2013 10:04 as a reply to  @ boerewors's post |  #5

Agree with the light in the second photo being the best.shame she is buried in grass plumes though.


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May 03, 2013 10:23 |  #6

i too love the second photo,

the last one is nice, but for some reason my eyes are drawn to her shorts. :)

which i do like. :)

and her hair color is nice......... heehee

and i am a newbie to all this so know little at all. :)

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May 03, 2013 14:02 |  #7

I think the first one needs to be cropped with the subject, the tree, and the sun dead center.




  
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phonguyen
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May 03, 2013 17:53 |  #8

thank you all for your comments... btw boerewors: it's 200mm f/3.2




  
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poulette
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May 03, 2013 18:59 |  #9

Quite new at CC but will have a shot here First image I think the girl looks a bit disconnected,with the second I love it, a beautiful portrait with the subject slightly off centre which to me works well.Number three could have been nice but looks way too overstaurated to my eyes and chopping the feet off is a bit unfortunate.Many thanks for posting.
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