My niece Aimee walking home through a field at sunset
christyjo2 Goldmember 2,275 posts Joined Oct 2006 Location: Arkansas More info | May 23, 2013 14:26 | #2 She is very cute. The composition is nice, but her face seems to be a little too dark in the images, and i think giving them a nice warm look would be nice as well. These have a bit too much of a red tint going on. She's adorable. *Christy* "If at first you dont succeed...destroy all evidence that you tried." www.christyfullerphotography.info
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RSBurton Member 192 posts Joined Sep 2010 Location: Chicago Area More info | May 26, 2013 15:58 | #4 I would suggest some off camera or fill flash to help with the shadows. 7D / 28-135, Canon 50mm f/1.8, 85mm, Canon 24-70mm 2.8 I, 50-250mm IS, (3) 600ex-rt
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May 26, 2013 21:12 | #5 Definitely need fill. Also, color temp seems a bit "off". Did you use anything for post color correction? Might be helpful as well. Images well composed.
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May 28, 2013 05:28 | #6 Thanks for the feedback. I don't have a fill flash, will invest in one when money allows
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May 28, 2013 06:54 | #7 Adorable girl, distracting dress. Without flash, I would suggest that the subject be partially hit by the sunlight to brighten her face and give her more depth. Get her angled so the sun is about 45ยบ from her nose.
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Rhinotherunt Looking for a Rock ![]() 7,129 posts Likes: 2 Joined Jun 2006 Location: Jasper, AL More info | May 28, 2013 11:56 | #8 Cute photos. A little magenta heavy. Ryan McGill
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May 28, 2013 20:37 | #9 I went into Lightroom and edited the image. See what you think. Increased temp +48, contrast +18, Blacks -38, bumped up Clarity +10, Vibrance +2 and Saturation +2, increased Red Luminance +27. File size exceeded 150K and couldn't open in PS...or I'd post results. JMHO.
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