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Jun 02, 2013 15:04 |  #1

Have at it:

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Jun 02, 2013 15:07 |  #2

I really like all of them, BUT, I LOVE the first one :).


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Jun 02, 2013 15:11 |  #3

Have to agree, love the first one. Colouring in third one isn't for me, but nice shot nevertheless.


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Jun 02, 2013 15:34 |  #4

LOVE 1 and 2...

5's nice too!




  
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Jun 02, 2013 17:02 |  #5

Grayman wrote in post #15992221 (external link)
Have to agree, love the first one. Colouring in third one isn't for me, but nice shot nevertheless.

Yeah, the cop lights made it weird.


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Jun 02, 2013 18:42 |  #6

very nice pictures congrats! :)




  
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Jun 02, 2013 19:55 |  #7

The first shot is the best here. Great job with it. I might have explored the orange/red reflected on the water with the silhouettes of trees more for a different shot.




  
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Jun 02, 2013 20:04 |  #8

CoPhotoGuy wrote in post #15993094 (external link)
The first shot is the best here. Great job with it. I might have explored the orange/red reflected on the water with the silhouettes of trees more for a different shot.

Ahhh. I see where you are going with that. Thank you all!


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Jun 03, 2013 02:36 as a reply to  @ xinvisionx's post |  #9

No1 & 2 for me.
Love the colour and closeness of 1, and 2 is quite surreal...


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Jun 03, 2013 04:03 as a reply to  @ reheat module's post |  #10

I agree that they are all very good. I'd darken the roadway and light streaks in #1 to throw more emphasis on the fire.
#2 Is my favorite but I have no idea what I'm looking at. Is that a natural shot or did you do something in PP?


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Jun 03, 2013 21:36 |  #11

Qbx wrote in post #15994068 (external link)
I agree that they are all very good. I'd darken the roadway and light streaks in #1 to throw more emphasis on the fire.
#2 Is my favorite but I have no idea what I'm looking at. Is that a natural shot or did you do something in PP?

The smoke cast a shadow on the layer of smoke below. Given the suns angles...that's really and truly what it looked like. I've never seen anything like it before.


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Jun 03, 2013 21:43 |  #12

xinvisionx wrote in post #15996929 (external link)
The smoke cast a shadow on the layer of smoke below. Given the suns angles...that's really and truly what it looked like. I've never seen anything like it before.

If that's not PP then that is a glorious capture... imho. I also quite like #1!




  
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Jun 04, 2013 00:09 |  #13

i dont see how the car lights add anything to the subject or compositions.
the back-lit cloud is awesome, but the context is lost. its not easy to tell if it is rain cloud or smoke.
the last one is the sleeper in the set--it tells a story. a bit closer and/or wider angle would be super.
and please do straighten the horizons :) be safe out there!




  
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Jun 04, 2013 02:28 as a reply to  @ sally_tomato's post |  #14

T & A.........all of them




  
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Jun 05, 2013 10:10 |  #15

yep, like them all too



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