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Jul 14, 2013 20:33 |  #1

two pictures that I kinda like. good. bad I don't know. you'thoughts if any

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Jul 14, 2013 22:50 |  #2

Massively underexposed?




  
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Jul 15, 2013 00:34 |  #3

I like the composition in the second one better. You might try playing with settings in postprocessing, change the tones, see what you come up with. I've been doing that with underexposed fruit in another thread.


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Jul 15, 2013 06:18 |  #4

I guess it must be my taste. I under rxposed these in post




  
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Jul 15, 2013 06:24 |  #5

the first was a lone exposure painted with a flash light, maybe could use a little more light, looks better on my desktop




  
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Jul 16, 2013 11:00 |  #6

I see what you are trying to do, but probably need higher ISO.


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Jul 16, 2013 11:54 |  #7

jlw470 wrote in post #16121387 (external link)
the first was a lone exposure painted with a flash light, maybe could use a little more light, looks better on my desktop

One difficulty with that image is that I don't know what the two objects that aren't fruit are or why they're in the scene. Are they associated with the fruit in some way? I also think they detract from the composition.


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Jul 16, 2013 12:01 |  #8

Definitely underexposed. I say just boost the light a bit and you're good to go.


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