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Jul 15, 2013 21:48 |  #1

Working on some minimalist style posters for my upcoming documentary where a college university is traveling to New Zealand for sports ministry. I'm not keen on the typography and how it is set up. Any tips on how to fix all of this?


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Jul 15, 2013 23:28 |  #2

wrong forum altogether?


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Jul 16, 2013 07:25 |  #3

Too much negative space, try using a thinner font. Yes you are on the wrong forum.


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Jul 16, 2013 09:53 |  #4

Try placing the horizon according the the rule of thirds. In other words, put the horizon a third of the way up from the bottom instead of across the middle.


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Jul 23, 2013 22:50 |  #7

Also at the bottom you could mention a little more on the documentary. Maybe who it's from but use a small font.


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Jul 24, 2013 08:55 |  #8

Tiberius wrote in post #16124949 (external link)
Try placing the horizon according the the rule of thirds. In other words, put the horizon a third of the way up from the bottom instead of across the middle.

... Or put the horizon two thirds up from the bottom and the text in the black area.

This way, it would better relate to the idea of "ascending".


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