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Interior shot Attempt (Friend's shop)

 
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Sep 04, 2013 14:58 |  #1

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Sep 04, 2013 15:00 |  #2

I like the lighting. Not an interior photographer, but I really do like this one.


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Sep 04, 2013 15:06 |  #3

Shop?....shop? Man, what does he do?

Nicely done. I like the light. Not sure about the shirts hanging on the left.


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Sep 04, 2013 15:09 |  #4

Yeah, this is a shop. He sells high quality leather shoes + those shirts.


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Sep 04, 2013 15:09 |  #5

Titus213 wrote in post #16267974 (external link)
Shop?....shop? Man, what does he do?

Nicely done. I like the light. Not sure about the shirts hanging on the left.

Lol.that was my first thought! Agree with the shirt.


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Sep 04, 2013 15:10 |  #6

Looks good, my only nitpiks are the blue shirted apparition and the flash in the door. If you could clone those out it would be great!




  
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Sep 04, 2013 15:13 |  #7

tmoore323 wrote in post #16267986 (external link)
Looks good, my only nitpiks are the blue shirted apparition and the flash in the door. If you could clone those out it would be great!

No flash used, that's the street lamp/light.

Agreed though, also on the blue TV thingy, I should've cloned those out. Thanks.


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Sep 04, 2013 15:19 |  #8

I like the lighting, well done. Perhaps a bit of perspective correction would work.

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Sep 04, 2013 16:12 |  #9

Yep, looks like I need to pay more attention on that as well. Thanks


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Sep 07, 2013 01:36 |  #10

I was going to say level it but perspective would fix it.......


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Sep 07, 2013 03:44 |  #11

Moin wrote in post #16267984 (external link)
Yeah, this is a shop. He sells high quality leather shoes + those shirts.

No offense, it looks nice and all, good job on the light, but the main subject is a couch. If it's for yourself, then fine. But if it's intended as promotion material for your friend, then there's too much couch, too little shoes and clothes.


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