square format and early attempt at composing the shot
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rivas8409 Goldmember ![]() 2,498 posts Likes: 567 Joined Mar 2011 Location: Lemoore, California More info | Sep 09, 2013 00:38 | #2 Composition works for me, but the focus seems a tad soft. Maybe from web compression? I would just expect a sharper image from a 5DIII any of those lenses you have listed. Body: Canon 5DmkII│Canon M50
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stanclark Goldmember ![]() 1,143 posts Likes: 6 Joined Jan 2012 Location: Windsor,California More info | Sep 09, 2013 00:46 | #3 1/60 second at f5 it will be little soft from motion blur, but the front of the first trolley looks pretty good but the people below it look a tad blurry So if God made Man & Woman....whats his excuse for Nikon...
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Titus213 Cream of the Crop ![]() More info | Sep 09, 2013 00:59 | #4 I like the composition. Color looks good but it gives the impression of being under exposed to me. Perhaps all those dark trees. Dave
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Sep 09, 2013 23:19 | #5 rivas8409 wrote in post #16280598 ![]() Composition works for me, but the focus seems a tad soft. Maybe from web compression? I would just expect a sharper image from a 5DIII any of those lenses you have listed. I shot this with my old XTi and a Sigma 18-200 ISO 400 Brad
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Sep 09, 2013 23:21 | #6 Titus213 wrote in post #16280643 ![]() I like the composition. Color looks good but it gives the impression of being under exposed to me. Perhaps all those dark trees. You were at 63mm so 1/60 should be doable - if the subject wasn't moving which I suspect was a big part of the scene. Overall a pretty nice shot. Thanks, I will try applying lighting to the trees Brad
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vk2gwk Cream of the Crop ![]() 12,973 posts Gallery: 281 photos Likes: 1111 Joined Jun 2009 Location: One Mile Beach, NSW 2316, Australia More info | Sep 10, 2013 00:09 | #7 Composition looks balanced. Even with the shadows boosted it still looks a bit flat in the background to me. Bit more contrast, may be? My name is Henk. and I believe "It is all in the eye of the beholder....."
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rivas8409 Goldmember ![]() 2,498 posts Likes: 567 Joined Mar 2011 Location: Lemoore, California More info | Sep 10, 2013 16:09 | #8 bpietrzak wrote in post #16283749 ![]() I shot this with my old XTi and a Sigma 18-200 ISO 400 OOOOhhhhhhhhhhhh....... Body: Canon 5DmkII│Canon M50
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rivas8409 Goldmember ![]() 2,498 posts Likes: 567 Joined Mar 2011 Location: Lemoore, California More info | Sep 10, 2013 16:10 | #9 Your second edit looks much better in IMO by the way. Body: Canon 5DmkII│Canon M50
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Titus213 Cream of the Crop ![]() More info | Sep 10, 2013 16:37 | #10 Agree, your second edit looks much better. Much more depth and the light looks good. Nice job. Dave
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revluke Senior Member 438 posts Likes: 4 Joined Oct 2012 Location: Minneapolis, MN More info | Sep 11, 2013 21:08 | #11 is the horizon falling off left a little or am I leaning in my chair? 5dIII | 70d | Rokinon 14 | 16-35 f4 IS | 40 2.8 | s50A | 70-200 2.8 IS II | 100 f2 | s120-300S | sigma 2x | 600EX-RT
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Sep 11, 2013 23:07 | #12 revluke wrote in post #16289680 ![]() is the horizon falling off left a little or am I leaning in my chair? LOL it appears so... Brad
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Sep 23, 2013 17:34 | #13 Titus213 wrote in post #16285909 ![]() Agree, your second edit looks much better. Much more depth and the light looks good. Nice job. Thanks and thanks for your feedback Brad
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Puckman Cream of the Crop More info | Sep 23, 2013 18:01 | #14 I like the overall composition. Sony A7RII and a bunch of lenses.
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