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A focus on the fat guy with the blurred model would have been funny.

iupufans wrote in post #16306169
A focus on the fat guy with the blurred model would have been funny.

I thought it was a misfocus therefor focusing on the woman

As for my real critique. I agree the BG maybe a little "busy", so a shallow DOF would have helped a bit. The first shot also has some hotspots in the upper left...That guy cannonballing is just too funny though!.

The model looks good in both images, nice even lighting and all that jazz

WOWWW B R A V O

...That guy cannonballing is just too funny though!.


That guy is rock and roll photographer Guido Carp from Germany. He and his amazing wife are my mentors.

Maybe clone the water up to fill the background with it?

Without Guido. Maybe if Guido was looking at her direction.