I'd love to see that, same time of day, from 3 feet to the right. Sun just visible from a crack. Something like the shot below ... using the sun for backlight and maybe a peep of it shining thru.
On the baby photo - love the colors, lighting, softness, etc. 8/10.
Here's mine from a recent Yosimite trip (before the fire).
heres another view,i know the color filter prob doesnt work for this shot but i wanted to make the sky very dramatic,i hope to get back there before it snows here,oooops to late,it snowed today haha,
DSC_0419-1 by eveilkneivil, on Flickr