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Oct 13, 2013 07:56 |  #1

Let me know what you guys think.

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Oct 13, 2013 10:32 |  #2

Nicely done with exposure & focus. Coach her a little on posing to keep both legs unlocked.
Maybe try some rim light next time and vary your main and fill ratio more to create some shadowing. And lift your main light higher - in these shots it looks like the main was lower than eye level. It needs to be much higher.


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Oct 13, 2013 12:43 |  #3

i like 5 and 9 best,the standing poses dont seem to work for me,a crop of those ones might be nice,also i would like to see a b&w of number 5


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Oct 13, 2013 12:47 |  #4

genesimmons wrote in post #16367720 (external link)
i like 5 and 9 best,the standing poses dont seem to work for me,a crop of those ones might be nice,also i would like to see a b&w of number 5

Yeah a few of them i didn't like my self. especially the one with half her arm cut out of the frame. i just edited the ones she thought looked the best.


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Oct 13, 2013 19:10 |  #5

I like the first two best because you shot her on an angle that flatters her as opposed to straight on, and also because she seems most naturally posed here.


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Oct 13, 2013 20:09 |  #6

Nice shots, looks like it was a fun shoot.


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Oct 13, 2013 23:39 |  #7

i can see the curves in your background material.




  
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Oct 14, 2013 00:07 |  #8

killertofu wrote in post #16368955 (external link)
i can see the curves in your background material.

Yeah i notice that too! What do you guys usually do here. photoshop the background more ? or Fix it before the shoot ?


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