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Oct 12, 2013 18:52 |  #1

I would love to know your thoughts? Is my positioning off? Flash off? Composition off? BW off? Too much Vignette? She's only 3 but I feel like she looks much older here. I love taking pictures of her when she is just doing her own thing...

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Oct 13, 2013 01:49 |  #2

I think it's cropped a little tight. It would be nice to see what she's focusing on too. That would help tell the story. :)


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Oct 13, 2013 05:03 |  #3

Isn't it a little soft? And the girl should have a little more space to look into.


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Oct 13, 2013 11:25 |  #4

I agree with above- too soft and I keep wondering what she is looking at.


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Oct 13, 2013 23:41 |  #5

add more empty space in front of her face so we can sort of move our eyes in the direction she's looking at instead of just the edge of the photo




  
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