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4th Official Wedding! Would love more C&C :)

 
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Oct 15, 2013 11:34 |  #1

OK, Now that I have already posted these, This is acutally the 3rd wedding, the other post was our most recent one! Hopefully you see some improvement from this one to the other post. I had issues with shadows from my umbrella/flashes in this church and I placed them closer to the aisle at the next wedding.

We had 6 hours with this one, so we got to cover some of the reception too!

Full wedding blog post here if you are interested: Catholic Wedding Wichita KS- Marshall Photography (external link)

Without further adeu, here's the pics!
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IMAGE: http://marshallphotographyks.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/Wichita_Wedding_St-Elizabeth_052.jpg
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IMAGE: http://marshallphotographyks.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/Wichita_Wedding_St-Elizabeth_141.jpg
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IMAGE: http://marshallphotographyks.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/Wichita_Wedding_St-Elizabeth_311.jpg
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IMAGE: http://marshallphotographyks.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/Wichita_Wedding_St-Elizabeth_422.jpg
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IMAGE: http://marshallphotographyks.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/Wichita_Wedding_St-Elizabeth_521.jpg
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IMAGE: http://marshallphotographyks.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/Wichita_Wedding_St-Elizabeth_611.jpg
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IMAGE: http://marshallphotographyks.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/Wichita_Wedding_St-Elizabeth_661.jpg
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IMAGE: http://marshallphotographyks.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/Wichita_Wedding_St-Elizabeth_771.jpg

Thank you so much for the critique!

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Oct 15, 2013 12:30 |  #2

These are better than the "3rd" wedding you posted.


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Oct 15, 2013 13:02 |  #3

Thanks Ryan,

Having 6 hours gave us more time to have fun with it and not be stressed trying to get every photo on the list! Also, the light was pretty good in this church, easily ISO 3200 or less.


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Oct 15, 2013 13:15 |  #4

Yeah...they look a lot better than the "3rd" wedding. I guess the lighting there was atrocious.


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Oct 15, 2013 13:40 |  #5

01Ryan10 wrote in post #16373182 (external link)
Yeah...they look a lot better than the "3rd" wedding. I guess the lighting there was atrocious.

This is why OFC really helps.


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Oct 15, 2013 13:45 |  #6

I guess things you can improve in the future is the white balance. Your 3rd photo (external link) is perfect,but others are too warm


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Oct 15, 2013 13:59 |  #7

Thanks for the WB comments, I really need to calibrate my screen, they look great on my editing PC, but at work they look too warm. It's really frustrating to me.

Any suggestions on posing? I really need help there!


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dmitrim wrote in post #16373251 (external link)
I guess things you can improve in the future is the white balance. Your 3rd photo is perfect,but others are too warm

Actually 3rd looks a bit too cool for me. The "correct" WB is not always the best. Most people tend to like warmer WB especially at weddings




  
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Oct 15, 2013 16:21 |  #9

White balance is definitely a preference and I love the warmer looks for wedding photos!

#7 could benefit from some DOF and darkening up your blacks.

I absolutely love 5 and 6!




  
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Oct 16, 2013 12:11 |  #10

#1 has a foot going through the person on the left.
#4 her left hand looks a bit like a claw. Don't let them do a full kiss. It
flattens their lips.

Nice start though:)


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Oct 17, 2013 18:48 |  #11

robots4joey wrote in post #16373285 (external link)
Thanks for the WB comments, I really need to calibrate my screen, they look great on my editing PC, but at work they look too warm. It's really frustrating to me.

Any suggestions on posing? I really need help there!

For females of larger proportions, avoid posing sideways as it shows stomach
watch for hands that don't press against their body as it increases their size
Try to shoot at eye level or higher to avoid seeing double chin
#6 for example. Her chin is pressed too tight against her shoulder and double chin is visible. If you were higher, that would not have happened.

These are good for any size females though.

It all comes with experience and observation.


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