Haven't shot in awhile so a bit rusty. This is her first time modeling but she did a great job 
Any comments or critiques to help me improve would be great!
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Thanks for looking!
bsaber I have no idea what's going on  3,536 posts Likes: 3 Joined Aug 2007 Location: Los Angeles, CA More info | Oct 20, 2013 23:19 | #1 Haven't shot in awhile so a bit rusty. This is her first time modeling but she did a great job 2. 3. 4. Thanks for looking!
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fashionrider Goldmember 1,093 posts Likes: 22 Joined Dec 2011 More info | Oct 21, 2013 02:59 | #2 i think you should warm them up a tad as she's lacking that warm feeling. with the scenery and lighting, a warm look would be great. All the photos are good. #3 has potential but needs some work in post (warm it up, darken the bg a tad, brighten the subject a tad, etc). Gear List (5D3, 70-200 f2.8L IS II, Sigma 85mm f1.4, Sigma 35mm f1.4, 50 f1.8, 24-105L, Alien Bee lights, etc etc)
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bsaber THREAD STARTER I have no idea what's going on 3,536 posts Likes: 3 Joined Aug 2007 Location: Los Angeles, CA More info | Oct 21, 2013 03:34 | #3 fashionrider wrote in post #16386654  i think you should warm them up a tad as she's lacking that warm feeling. with the scenery and lighting, a warm look would be great. All the photos are good. #3 has potential but needs some work in post (warm it up, darken the bg a tad, brighten the subject a tad, etc). Thanks for the tips!
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CarrolLP Member 83 posts Joined Sep 2013 Location: Atlanta More info | Oct 21, 2013 04:12 | #4  Permanent banFirst of all she looks gorgeous 6D, 5D, 1DS III, 1DX, 70-200mm II, EF 85 II, 50mm & EF 135mm
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CanonVsNikon Senior Member 255 posts Joined Jan 2013 More info | Oct 21, 2013 08:41 | #5 Permanent banPosing, framing, focus all are spot on. And she has a great smile.
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bsaber THREAD STARTER I have no idea what's going on 3,536 posts Likes: 3 Joined Aug 2007 Location: Los Angeles, CA More info | Oct 21, 2013 12:37 | #6 CarrolLP wrote in post #16386718 First of all she looks gorgeous All the shots are great but my all time favorite is either number 1 or 4.CanonVsNikon wrote in post #16387077 Posing, framing, focus all are spot on. And she has a great smile. Like others have said, a little PP like warming & contrast would make this set killer Thanks for the input!
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