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Oct 20, 2013 23:19 |  #1

Haven't shot in awhile so a bit rusty. This is her first time modeling but she did a great job :) Any comments or critiques to help me improve would be great!

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Oct 21, 2013 02:59 |  #2

i think you should warm them up a tad as she's lacking that warm feeling. with the scenery and lighting, a warm look would be great. All the photos are good. #3 has potential but needs some work in post (warm it up, darken the bg a tad, brighten the subject a tad, etc).


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Oct 21, 2013 03:34 |  #3

fashionrider wrote in post #16386654 (external link)
i think you should warm them up a tad as she's lacking that warm feeling. with the scenery and lighting, a warm look would be great. All the photos are good. #3 has potential but needs some work in post (warm it up, darken the bg a tad, brighten the subject a tad, etc).

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Oct 21, 2013 04:12 |  #4
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First of all she looks gorgeous :) All the shots are great but my all time favorite is either number 1 or 4.


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Posing, framing, focus all are spot on. And she has a great smile.

Like others have said, a little PP like warming & contrast would make this set killer




  
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Oct 21, 2013 12:37 |  #6

CarrolLP wrote in post #16386718 (external link)
First of all she looks gorgeous :) All the shots are great but my all time favorite is either number 1 or 4.

CanonVsNikon wrote in post #16387077 (external link)
Posing, framing, focus all are spot on. And she has a great smile.

Like others have said, a little PP like warming & contrast would make this set killer

Thanks for the input! :)




  
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