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Oct 31, 2013 23:58 |  #1

took these the other day and imo think they are some of my better pictures i have got lately. just a bit of PP in LR and thats it. let me know what icould have done to make them better or what you think of them!:)
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Nov 01, 2013 16:56 |  #2

any thoughts?


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Nov 01, 2013 23:22 |  #3

#1 has an odd perspective tilt that could be corrected in Lightroom
I like 2 and 4 has interesting light.


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Nov 02, 2013 00:39 |  #4
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#1 isn't good: too busy and the verticals aren't so.

#2 is very striking. Only 'problem' is the top crop: too tight and it chops off the tips of the building and the railing.

#3 is very good too; I'd just get rid of the disturbing spots (tree branches creeping into the frame) on the left.

I like the light in #4, but the background is quite busy, even with the shallow DOF.


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Nov 02, 2013 19:42 |  #5

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#1 isn't good: too busy and the verticals aren't so.

#2 is very striking. Only 'problem' is the top crop: too tight and it chops off the tips of the building and the railing.

#3 is very good too; I'd just get rid of the disturbing spots (tree branches creeping into the frame) on the left.

I like the light in #4, but the background is quite busy, even with the shallow DOF.

thanks i appreciate the comments. composition is one of my biggest problems id say right now. still working on it.


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Nov 02, 2013 23:40 |  #6

#1 Is fairly boring. There's cool light in the windows but nothing attention grabbing.
#2 Is awesome, in my opinion. I'd keep it. There are some halos in there around the edges of the building though. But cool picture. You made a good choice of composition there.
#3 Is mediocre at best, it's not bad, but I'd say it's pretty snapshot-ish.
#4 I'm sorry, but I'd call that one the worst of the bunch. There's nothing much interesting in there to me and there's some slop around the headstone from editing. I'm guessing you went in there with adjustment brushes? It looks like you scribbled outside the lines a bit. I'm having a hard time keeping clean lines, myself, so I feel your pain.




  
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