3/10, I feel like you had a really solid shot but completely trashed it with the editing. Maybe it's just me but I feel like that style is repulsive and soils really good shots. Also, their faces are kinda blown out and that's what I want to focus on. Just my $.02. I checked your Flickr and liked just about everything, other than the shot you posted up here lol.
In the Endzone by tdeef, on Flickr