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Nov 19, 2013 22:53 |  #1

Dirty sweet and the Kids. Bow Wow. Like dislike you thoughts,
Dirty sweet was a grab shot of a family portrait with a twist. Bow wow I waited by the sign for appropriate subject.


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Nov 20, 2013 06:23 |  #2

both out of focus amd blue lady head chopped off a bit,,i like the blue lady one though

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Nov 20, 2013 06:38 |  #3

That little girl is digging for some gold :)

What were your settings? Both are way OOF...




  
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Nov 20, 2013 08:12 |  #4

Don't remember settings . I will check the original raw file.re focus
thanks for feedback. Yup both out of focus, bummer.




  
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Nov 20, 2013 09:09 |  #5

I like #2 too. It looks like her boyfriend is a gorilla just getting off a Harley. The sign is in focus.

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Nov 20, 2013 09:17 |  #6
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These are pure snapshots. This in itself is not bad if that is what you are going for. But they are also OOF




  
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Nov 20, 2013 22:37 |  #7

Some interesting scenes with potential but rather poorly executed. Both focus and exposure are way off and composition is messy.

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Nov 21, 2013 09:58 as a reply to  @ vk2gwk's post |  #8

Thanks for your constructive comments, both grab shots that appealed to my bent sensibilities lol.




  
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