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Dec 04, 2013 17:57 |  #1

Had the opportunity to work with a new and upcoming model recently. She was a real joy to work with.


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Dec 04, 2013 18:19 |  #2

Your focus is way off. Were you focussing on her eyes?


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Dec 05, 2013 12:30 |  #3

Yep way off....


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Dec 05, 2013 12:33 |  #4

This works if it an advertisement for her bracelet.


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Dec 05, 2013 13:35 |  #5

focus is mainly on her arm


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Dec 05, 2013 18:11 |  #6

Indeed it was. She makes jewelry....


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Dec 05, 2013 20:57 |  #7

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Indeed it was. She makes jewelry....

with that being the case, would like to see a shot where she has her hand and wrist moved alongside her face, so all could be in focus.


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Dec 06, 2013 07:06 |  #8

If this was intentional focusing, I don't think it really lets the viewer know we are mean to be looking at her bracelet. The DOF either needs to be more extreme or her wrist needs to be closer to her face..


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Plus her bracelet is in bottom right of the frame. My eyes instantly go to her OOF face




  
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Dec 06, 2013 10:21 |  #10

I don't know how much more I can contribute here since the obvious has been said.

I will say that a classy and beautiful woman like that needs something better than a $10 Wal-Mart chair to pose on.


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Dec 06, 2013 17:50 |  #11

Focus is not on her arm in a good way... as others mentioned it is at the bottom of the frame and totally not the center of attention. Not obvious at all that jewelry was supposed to be the focus. Arm and the bracelets don't look like they are in focus either...


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