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Feb 08, 2014 15:36 |  #1

Hi all..

One of today's portfolio photo session.

Any C&C is much appreciated.

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Feb 08, 2014 18:10 |  #2

Very cute.

Good exposure and pose position of arms etc.

With the foot out from her body, it looks a little enlarged. Imho either tuck the lag in closer (turn more to camera left) or shoot from a higher angle.
Edit: or longer lens.

Also i am a little uncomfortable with the amount of leg showing on a girl of this age.


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Feb 08, 2014 18:34 |  #3

Micro5797 wrote in post #16674612 (external link)
Also i am a little uncomfortable with the amount of leg showing on a girl of this age.

Ditto. It comes across as overly sexual imo. Otherwise very cute.


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Feb 11, 2014 01:01 |  #4

Micro5797 wrote in post #16674612 (external link)
Very cute.

Good exposure and pose position of arms etc.

With the foot out from her body, it looks a little enlarged. Imho either tuck the lag in closer (turn more to camera left) or shoot from a higher angle.
Edit: or longer lens.

Also i am a little uncomfortable with the amount of leg showing on a girl of this age.

nes_matt wrote in post #16674663 (external link)
Ditto. It comes across as overly sexual imo. Otherwise very cute.

Thank you for your input guys.. I agree that there is distortion but honestly her feet
are a bit over size also. Next time will try to the keep the foot in such a pose more to the middle.

Regarding the leg, I agree and when choosing the photos with her mom I told her that this might be showing alot, but she said that she love the photo and still wants it in her daughter portfolio.. So i kept it..

Thanks again




  
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Feb 11, 2014 05:57 |  #5

technically its a nice image..

however i think the pose, makeup and outfit is somewhat inappropriate...


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Feb 11, 2014 07:42 |  #6

Love it, is all the CC I can give.


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Feb 11, 2014 14:30 |  #7

I don't think it is inappropriate. If the mom loved it, then don't worry about it, that is what matters.

Regarding the perspective distortion, what focal length were you using? If you were able to get the same framing with a longer lens that might help too. Although, I do think being at a slightly higher angle would have been better regardless.

Aside from that, the framing on the left side is too tight, it is almost clipping her elbow.


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Feb 11, 2014 15:49 |  #8

Rushmore wrote in post #16680560 (external link)
technically its a nice image..

however i think the pose, makeup and outfit is somewhat inappropriate...

I agree to some might some might think so.. but I am in peace as the mom approved it.

TJays wrote in post #16680714 (external link)
Love it, is all the CC I can give.

Thank you :)

SoCalTiger wrote in post #16681644 (external link)
I don't think it is inappropriate. If the mom loved it, then don't worry about it, that is what matters.

Regarding the perspective distortion, what focal length were you using? If you were able to get the same framing with a longer lens that might help too. Although, I do think being at a slightly higher angle would have been better regardless.

Aside from that, the framing on the left side is too tight, it is almost clipping her elbow.

I was using the 24-70mkii@67mm. Also I have applied the lens correction profile in post.. I should have tried the higher prespective, I will make sure to do so next time :)

Thank you for the elbow note. I will fix that now in post.

Thank you for your input..




  
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