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Feb 17, 2014 12:50 |  #1

Hi guys.

Would love to get some critique for portrait headshots photographers.

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Feb 17, 2014 18:14 |  #2

very nice. I think a slight kiss of light from behind on her dark side in both of these would help show a little shine in her hair and really make these pop. The second looks a little soft in the eyes, but maybe just because the eyes are such a light color. Maybe boost the contrast there a touch and sharpen a little? Also, a little hair spray to keep the fly aways down would help.


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Feb 17, 2014 21:31 |  #3

# 1 is a nice standard photograph....but the second photo...excellent...di​fferent...grabs my attention.




  
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Feb 17, 2014 21:40 |  #4
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Aye, #2 is better. The chin looks too prominent in #1.


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Feb 17, 2014 21:44 |  #5

1st one i great 2nd is oof too hot and WB is off


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Feb 17, 2014 21:52 |  #6
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Pixil Studio wrote in post #16697816 (external link)
1st one i great 2nd is oof too hot and WB is off

I should have said about my previous comment: expression-/posing-wise.

I find that the eyes are not sharp in #2.


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Mar 01, 2018 17:16 |  #7

The eyes pop a little too much. Makes them look like they are popping out


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