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Mar 31, 2014 12:31 |  #1

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Mar 31, 2014 12:39 |  #2

Lucky guy. Here is my suggestion: Go with a tighter crop and get rid of the edge on camera left and get rid of some head space at the same time. After being drawn to her face, the light corner pulls my eyes away from her. If there is room on at the bottom, you might play with dropping the frame to just above her elbow. Nice shot of a pretty girl.


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Mar 31, 2014 16:12 |  #3

^^
what he says. the light on the left side of the frame and the in focus masonry on the right are distractions for me.


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Mar 31, 2014 16:28 |  #4

tighter crop


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Mar 31, 2014 16:46 |  #5

Agree with both above. Pretty girl.


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Mar 31, 2014 18:39 |  #6

Great girlfriend, nice shot, but as stated, cut that bright spot on the left, don't want anything to compete with those eyes. Cut about 1/3 of the space above her head, wait all this has been said before, maybe I should have stopped at Great Girlfriend! Great exposure, the black jacket is nicely lite without losing detail.


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Apr 01, 2014 11:35 as a reply to  @ mjcarson's post |  #7

All the comments above cover things pretty well. Have you tried a portrait crop orientation instead of landscape? Her head is tilted forward quite a bit, so a portrait crop would have to be pretty tight - not sure how much of the wall and jacket you're willing to lose. Lovely gf.




  
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