WEBSITE ADVICE - Preparing for a swimsuit shoot

In order to make my life easier I'm putting a lot of the stuff I normally tell models on my website that I'm currently rebuilding. Please take look at the advice I give models who are preparing to do a swimsuit shoot with me and let me know if I left anything out?

http://www.jeffmmiller​.com …ing-for-a-swimsuit-shoot/

You are an amazing photographer but your entire website comes off very cocky and off putting in my opinion.

Then again with your portfolio I guess you can be cocky as you can deliver amazing images.

Littlejon Dsgn wrote in post #16944730
You are an amazing photographer but your entire website comes off very cocky and off putting in my opinion.

Then again with your portfolio I guess you can be cocky as you can deliver amazing images.

Good to know. So it can only come off that way from the writing not the images. Some of the attitude may be my way of weeding out flaky models. Was it the swimsuit writeup or did you look at other writing stuff. I need to go back and revise the other stuff badly. It was cut and paste from older stuff. It missing some stuff too that gives it a more personal feel.

Are you referring to the tf* writeup after the swimsuit stuff. I can see why you say that. It needs to be re written but it is on my mm page too to weed out flakes. I find if they can get past that message then they are devoted to the shoot.

I just started re doing this site 2 weeks ago. Brand new install of Koken.

I started on the swim suite writeup then moved to tge rest of the site.