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lightfighter6
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Jun 04, 2014 20:40 |  #1

My first engagement feedback needed please...

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Jun 05, 2014 10:00 |  #2

I think these look good! I like the first one the best. I know you are going for a lighter feel for these, but the completely blown out sky and highlights in #3 (and highlights in #4) could use some improvement. Not sure if you used a circular polarizer, but that may have helped since you did these at a wider angle. I would clone out the random people in #2. I feel like there should either be a lot of people in the background (since it is a public place) or none to look like you have the place to yourselves. Just my 2 cents.


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Jun 05, 2014 11:26 |  #3

I agree with the above comments. PS a few people out of the images and they will look much better. I dig the over exposure of the 3rd shot, but only if the shoes could be brought back, but even still, its too blown out. 1st image is great and I think you did a really good job capturing the location and nice expressions on their faces.

Keep up the good work!




  
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Jun 05, 2014 16:10 |  #4

Totally unrelated: these pictures make me want to go play Watch_Dogs. :)


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Jun 05, 2014 17:19 |  #5

Thanks for the comment guys i really appreciate it.


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