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Jun 13, 2014 00:14 |  #1

Any ways to improve this one?

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Jun 13, 2014 03:40 |  #2

Sweet pic. Looks a lot like Pasadena.
I think this pic is well composed, and well lit. Good job. I like the subtle light traces on the freeway too. Adds a sense of movement to the picture. Was this picture taken from a house? Or some hiking spot?




  
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Jun 13, 2014 08:29 |  #3

I like it as it is. Nice shot.


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Jun 13, 2014 08:47 |  #4

I like the shot and my only suggestion is to reduce the purple fringing on the bridge lamps.


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Jun 13, 2014 10:34 |  #5

Purple fringing should be corrected and it looks like you've got toxic green ground near the building near the center, off the right of the bridge.


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Jun 14, 2014 10:20 |  #6

More sky?


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Jun 15, 2014 03:07 |  #7

That does look like Pasadena.



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Jun 15, 2014 16:10 |  #8
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Yes! It looks better with more sky. Great shot. ;)


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Jun 21, 2014 19:10 |  #9

Put a cool filter on? It looks great!


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Jun 24, 2014 13:35 |  #10

RobinSchouten wrote in post #16973372 (external link)
Yes! It looks better with more sky. Great shot. ;)

Agree. Very, very nice capture.


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Jun 24, 2014 21:05 |  #11

Definitely a sweet shot!!! I can see reducing the purple tinge on the lights a bit and I like the more sky shot.


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