Thanks guys....I appreciate the comments.
The last texting bit is already sped up quite a lot. I wanted to make the two points that I did, and keep it slow enough that people could read it.
I do see that the wide shot is a little hot compared to the rest. Should have caught that.
The "zooming" effect is from the image stabilization plugin-in in Premiere Pro. (need a better stabilization plug-in.)
I did have a tracking shot that was the same direction...I just felt that this direction gave a more dramatic movement, as in rushing to the car feel. Maybe I was wrong thinking that.
As far as the scene of the girls being long, it might be. I had more chances to show off different angles and perspectives...so I did. I did want to include the seat-belt, because I wanted people to know that wearing a seat-belt is only a start to safety
Not sure about the sound being choppy....I just recorded what she said, the way she said it.
And I shortened the second part of the video some. But I did want it to mirror the the first part quite a lot. I wanted it to seem as if you were watching the same thing again...only with a phone in place of a beer.
I did also edit it all to fit within 60 seconds as well.....seems a bit rushed for me though.
Thanks again for your input!