Autumn in Autumn -- C&C requested

First model shoot with my new Fuji XT-1. Looking for any and all thoughts -- good and bad.

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I expected more autumn color from the title. Also, her eyes don't look in focus on my monitor.

Would liked to have seen a bit more of the scene, nice pic though, eyes a little fuzzy but that's just being picky

I am drawn to the front of her coat which seems to be in focus...and also has a lot of fuzz on it from her scarf.

Great comments -- thank you.

The eye thing has me bewildered. They are rock solid in lightroom -- somewhere that fell apart. I will take a look at that.

Pumped up fall color, toned down jacket, and checked eyes for sharpness -- better?

Better. Left side of her face seems a bit hot as well as the white patches on her scarf. She's got great eyes!

flowrider wrote in post #17263856
Better. Left side of her face seems a bit hot as well as the white patches on her scarf. She's got great eyes!

Thanks. Scarf is blown, but I brought her face down a little in the final.

These shots have two different looking eyes.

drdiesel1 wrote in post #17264236
These shots have two different looking eyes.

They do. For some reason, they got really soft when I posted the pic out of smugmug. The second post is from Flickr. Nothing changed about the eyes in either -- they are both from the same file, saved same way, in lightroom.

Great shot.
Eyes jump at me, I would tone down just a tad there and hairline seems a tad soft too me.