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Nov 14, 2014 08:57 |  #1

Hi all

I had a spa photoshoot a while ago. I took the photos also tried to design the brochure.. It is my first attempt, what do you think? Any C&C is much appreciated.

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Nov 14, 2014 10:20 |  #2

Honestly, I can't tell what it is so it looks a tiny bit creepy to me. I like the rest of it though!

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Nov 14, 2014 13:14 |  #3

Agree. I can't really tell what it is. Almost looks like a snake.


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Nov 14, 2014 14:29 |  #4

The logo is already set, as for the image it is the back with oil and water this is the cover and I will post below the images that will be on the other side and explaining the services. Those will be more clear that it is a spa :)

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Nov 14, 2014 14:35 |  #5

Nice lighting!


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Nov 14, 2014 15:00 |  #6

BrandonSi wrote in post #17272111 (external link)
Nice lighting!

Thank you.. I mainly used elenchromes but for some shots I used continuous light to be able to capture the candles light too..




  
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Nov 14, 2014 15:00 |  #7

Agreed, Very Nice lighting. Though, the OP looks like an arm pit to me. Not very appealing for a brochure.


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Jan 07, 2015 00:54 |  #8

Thank you..




  
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Jan 07, 2015 09:40 |  #9

Well done


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Jan 07, 2015 11:50 |  #10

Nice job. I guess I'm in the minority. I liked the first shot. First impression to me was the small of a back.


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Jan 07, 2015 12:10 |  #11

Agree with most here, cover for brochure should be warm and inviting for a spa. Not black and white and abstract.

Love the lighting and composition of the photo with the stones, that one caught my eye!




  
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Jan 07, 2015 13:03 |  #12

Great photography. But sweaty backs down to the buttocks say "erotic massage" more than "spa.". Would a mother saying that say, "I think my and daughter and I should god there."?




  
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