One of ideas....wondering what do you think.....
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I think it is a very nice shot. I like the symmetry. I'm not clear on the title of Retro however?
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It's weird that when I put noise on the picture myself I like it but like now when somebody else is doing it i don´t like.
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I like the shot, but go the extra step and clone out the black object lying on the ground near the model's dress and perhaps clone stamp out what could be some sort of pantyline on her dress that crosses over to the bright side of the image. Might also be better if model was further from camera so the bottom of the dress wasn't cut off.
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When going for symmetry, I like it to be as close to perfect as possible. The two banisters are at quite different angles. That isn't something you could change--I guess one of them is beside a ramp--but, in addition, the model isn't centered on the doorway, and her left forearm and hand are farther out to the side than her right. More of the building is present at the left edge, too.
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