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Jan 09, 2015 15:37 |  #1

Would love some ideas for a title for this photo, and any comments and/or criticism is encouraged.

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Jan 09, 2015 15:40 |  #2

Can you post a larger photo - very difficult to critique something this small


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Jan 09, 2015 16:19 |  #3

I'd love to see her with out the hand. Nice color.


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Jan 09, 2015 19:21 |  #4

Photo should be larger now. Accidentally put the thumbnail.




  
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Jan 09, 2015 19:37 |  #5

a lovely lady and a good photo. Is she a model?




  
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Jan 09, 2015 19:43 |  #6

Gorgeous. love it.


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Jan 09, 2015 20:17 as a reply to  @ Rainyday's post |  #7

Thank you and yes modeling and dancing is her career.




  
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Jan 09, 2015 23:03 |  #8

Beautiful model and I love the way it is processed.


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Jan 10, 2015 03:08 |  #9

Often a photo composition will look better if the neckline is shown to the bottom of the V (or U, or whatever shape). This applies to necklaces too. This isn't about showing more cleavage, it's about making the shot look best.


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Feb 22, 2015 21:58 |  #10

Really awesome in and out of camera work. Is there a concept behind this?


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Feb 26, 2015 17:17 |  #11

Blocking out her eye seems like an odd gesture...but different I guess.




  
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Mar 01, 2015 12:20 |  #12

Really interesting shot. Would love to see more from the series.

Very richly processed. Great lighting and mood.

Interesting comment above about the v-neck. Would be interested to see it both ways side by side.

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Mar 01, 2015 21:15 |  #13

Very nice shot, and like the others, I really like the processing. I agree with the thoughts about a looser crop though.


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Mar 02, 2015 00:37 |  #14

Title suggestion: "See Less Evil"


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